Question

3．上海世博会"shanghai Expo"的召开，使上海成为全球瞩目的焦点．假如你是一名普通的上海中学生，你将如何行动为世博会添彩．
请根据所提供信息，以"How to be a lovely Shanghai student？"为题，用英语写一篇短文．
要求：1．词数80左右，短文开头不计入总词数．
2．可根据所给信息适当发挥，要求条理清楚，语句通顺，字迹工整．
With the opening ceremony of the Shanghai Expo，more and more visitors are coming to Shanghai．As student in Shanghai．I thinkit's our duty to make the Expo more successful．Never say"No"to the people in need．We should be polite to others and get ready to help them．We'd better not talk loudly in public．And remember to obey traffic rules．Then we need to plant more trees to improve our city enviroment．Finally，work hard and learn English well to help the foreigners know more about Shanghai．In short，we should do what we can．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think ①②it's our duty to make the Expo more successful我认为让世博会成功是我们的职责．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②it's one's duty to do sth 做某事是某人的职责．
【高分句型二】
Never say"No"to the people in need不要对需要的人说不．
in need介词短语做后置定语，修饰people．

解答 How to be a lovely Shanghai student？
　　With the opening ceremony of the Shanghai Expro，more and more visitors are coming to Shanghai．As a student in Shanghai，I think it's our duty to make the Expo more successful．【高分句型一】Never say"No"to the people in need．【高分句型二】We should be polite to others and get ready to help them．（礼貌，乐于助人）We'd better not talk loudly in public．（不喧哗）And remember to obey traffic rules．（遵守交规）Then we need to plant more trees to improve our city enviroment．（爱护环境）Finally，work hard and learn English well to help the foreigners know more about Shanghai．（学习英语）In short，we should do what we can．

点评 本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等．