Question

3．根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文．要求完整叙述图画内容．

It's dangerous to play on the street．
One day，Tom and John played football on the street．At that time a car was coming to them and hit Tom．He fell down and got injured．A policeman came here and sent him to the hospital．On the way，the policeman told them not to play on the street，it was dangerous．They felt sorry and decided not to play again．Then they went home happily．
We should pay attention to our safety，don't play on the street．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是用根据图画叙述不能在路上踢足球，有关安全的故事．时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；两个男孩在街上踢足球，车子撞倒了其中一个男孩，警察送他去医院，告诉他们不要在路上踢足球，危险，他们决定不再在路上踢足球了．
2．感想
常用到的重点短语：
at that time 那时
fall down 摔倒
tell sb not to do sth 让某人不要做某事
decide to do sth 决定做某事
pay attention to 关注
【高分句型】
1．It's dangerous to play on the street．
it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

2．On the way，the policeman told them not to play on the street，it was dangerous．
tell sb not to do sth 让某人不要做某事
3．We should pay attention to our safety，don't play on the street．
pay attention to 关注，to 是介词，后加名词代词或动名词．

解答 It's dangerous to play on the street．【高分句型】
   One day，Tom and John played football on the street．（第一幅图，在街上踢球）At that time a car was coming to them and hit Tom．He fell down and got injured．（第二幅图，撞倒受伤）A policeman came here and sent him to the hospital．On the way，the policeman told them not to play on the street，it was dangerous．【高分句型】（第三幅图，送去医院并告诫）They felt sorry and decided not to play again．Then they went home happily．（第四幅图，决定不再在路上玩耍）
    We should pay attention to our safety，don't play on the street．【高分句型】（感想）

点评 这是一篇给图画作文，根据图画叙述一个故事．结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用．写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用．写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系．