Question

假如你是第二中学的一名初三学生刘星，你要写一封信给青少年专家Sigmund，告诉他你遇到的问题，并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中的信息完成这封信。

姓名	刘星
星座	Gemini
最喜欢的颜色	橙色，因为橙色代表着快乐。
个人特质	善良、慷慨、自信，富有创造力
遇到的问题	1. 迷恋动漫真人秀(cosplay)，会花很多时间在这上面； 2. 父母对你不满意，要求你放弃这个爱好； 3. … (至少再补充两个)
目前需求	希望得到建议

注意：1．词数90左右。书信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

      2．书信须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺：

      3．书信中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Sigmund，

My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.

                                                                          

                                                                         

                                                                          

                                                                          

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

                                                         Your

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Sigmund，

My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.My constellation is Gemini。My favorite color is orange  ,because orange stands for happiness.I think I am kind-hearted, I often help the olds.I am also generous and confident.I am a creative boy.I often think of new jokes to make my friends laugh.

  Though I am a good boy,  I have some problems .I like cosplay very much .I often spend a lot of time on cosplay.But my parents are strict with me,they want me to give up this hobby,because they think it wastes my time.I have no time to study.I like chatting on line,my mother says that is a bad habit.And sometimes I come home too late,my parents are not happy.They aksme to get home on time.I don’t know how to slove these problems.Can you give me some advice?

Yours,

Liu Xing

【解析】

试题分析：根据题目提示，我们应该确定本文的时态应该用现在时，人称应该用第一人称；注意描述的顺序；注意时态，人称和固定词组搭配，注意连词的运用。注意句子的顺畅，应符合英语的表达习惯。这是一篇书信，主意格式及语气。

【亮点说明】文中用了许多固定短语，如my favorite color，be strict with，have no time to do sth，chat on line；come home too late，hand in，on time，give up等，能够很好的连接文章。根据表格，刘星有好的方面也有不好的方面，所以分开对比，效果更好。

考点：提纲作文。