Question

16．假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Mike 想和你交流有关"hobby"的问题，请你给Mike
回邮件，回答他提出的问题．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think you can get a lot from doing sports我认为做运动你会很快乐．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
if you do sports，you'll feel relaxed and happy如果你做运动，你会感到放松和快乐．
if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．

解答 Dear Mike，
Glad to hear from you again!In your letter you told me you wanted to develop a hobby and you needed my advice．Just as you know，many people have hobbies，so do my classmates．Some of them are interested in relaxing hobbies，such as reading，painting and listening to music，others enjoy active hobbies like swimming and playing basketball．（同学们会有什么样的爱好）
In my opinion，active hobbies are good choices for you．You usually spend too much time studying and sitting for too long time．So you'd better take some sports to keep fit，such as swimming，running and playing basketball．I think you can get a lot from doing sports．【高分句型一】．（建议，培养哪种爱好）First of all，if you do sports，you'll feel relaxed and happy．【高分句型二】Also，you can make friends when you do sports．（能带来什么）
Wish my advice could give you some help．
Yours，
Li Ming

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