Question

【题目】假设某中学生英文报开展关于计算机与学生生活的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以Computer in my life为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述计算机在你生活中的用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。

用途	学习	搜集资料；拓展阅读（或自拟内容）
	交流	传递信息；探讨问题（或自拟内容）
	生活	欣赏音乐；购买商品（或自拟内容）
	其他	（请考生自拟一点内容）
感受	计算机对你生活的影响（请考生自拟一点内容）

注意：

1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。

Computer in my life

The computer has become an important part of my life.

Answer 1

【答案】

Computer in my life

The computer has become an important part of my life. Usually I use the computer to search for information and do some further reading. With the help of computer，I can get more knowledge easily in my free time. I not only communicate with my teachers and classmates by email，but also discuss questions with them online. What’s more，I can enjoy the music online and shopping on the Internet makes my life much easier. Sometimes CD-ROMs help me learn English and make me relaxed. Moreover，I can take part in some kinds of activities online.

In a word，the computer is really of great help to me. It brings me a more meaningful and colourful life.

【解析】

试题本文是一篇提示类命题作文，以“计算机与学生生活”为话题贴近学生生活，要求考生依据提示以“Computer in my life”为题写一篇短文，因此在写作过程中要注意一下几点：1.紧扣体裁要求，体现说明文的特点。2.介绍用途过程中要注意说明的顺序，从“学习”“交流”“生活”及其他方面依次展开。3.要点齐全，提示中的要点必须全面覆盖，并有合理发挥。4.文章结尾务必要谈出计算机对自己生活的影响，作为结尾要紧扣主题有所升华。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：The computer has become an important part of my life. Usually I use the computer to search for information and do some further reading. I not only communicate with my teachers and classmates by email，but also discuss questions with them online.等，短文还用了一些连词，如：not only…but also…;and 等，给文章增加了亮点。为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词或句子，如what’s more；moreover；in a word等。