Question

4．请以"我最喜欢的…"为话题写一篇英语短文．
要求：1．把题目补充完整．
2．文中不能出现真实人名、校名和地名．
3．词数80-120词．
My favoriteanimal．

Answer 1

分析 此文为话题作文．要求以"我最喜欢的…"为话题写一篇英语短文，即My favorite…；应首先把题目补充完整；此篇文章以My favorite animal为例，介绍自己最喜欢的一种动物；由于介绍的为第三方，所以人称主要为第三人称，时态主要为一般现在时．可以按如下要点来行文：
1．点明喜欢的动物海豚
2．介绍海豚特点及生活习性以及对人类的帮助
3．介绍其生活现状
4．呼吁人们对其进行保护
重点短语：
live on 以…为生
and so on 等等
in danger处于危险中
in the past years在过去的几年里
smaller and smaller越来越小
less and less 越来越少
make money 挣钱
take actions 采取行动
高分句型：
1．People often train them so that they can give a dolphin show which brings people a lot of happiness and joy．人们经常训练他们，以便他们能给人们带来一个很多幸福和快乐的海豚表演．
so that表目的"为了"，引导目的状语此句；which brings people a lot of happiness and joy为which引导的定语从句，修饰前面的先行词 a dolphin show，指能给人们带来一个很多幸福和快乐的海豚表演．
2．Because of water pollution，there is less and less space for dolphins．由于水的污染，海豚的空间越来越少了．
because of由于，因为，其后接名词、代词或动名词；there be结构表示某处有某物，注意be动词应遵循就近原则，space为不可数名词，故用is；less and less比较级的特殊用法，越来越少，修饰不可数名词space
3．If we don't protect them，maybe we'll lose our good friends one day．如果我们不保护他们，也许有一天我们会失去我们的好朋友．
这是由if引导的条件状语从句．时态遵循主将从现．one day固定短语，指将来的某一天．

解答 My favourite animal
Dolphin is my favourite animal．It is one of the most precious animals．【点明喜欢的动物】Their bodies are very long，about one zhang（丈）．Dolphins live in the sea．They live on fish，shrimps and so on．Dolphins are very friendly and peaceful．They never attack people．Instead，they have saved many people in danger in the past years．How helpful the dolphins are!Dolphins are very clever．People often train them so that they can give a dolphin show which brings people a lot of happiness and joy．【高分句型】【介绍海豚特点及生活习性以及对人类的帮助】Unluckily，the number of dolphins is getting smaller and smaller．Because of water pollution，there is less and less space for dolphins．【高分句型】Many people make money by hunting dolphins．If we don't protect them，maybe we'll lose our good friends one day．【高分句型】【介绍其生活现状】As a student，I hope more and more people should take actions to protect dolphins．【呼吁人们对其进行保护】

点评 这是一篇命题作文．在写作过程中注意篇章结构，合理布局．开始部分（opening paragraph）--说出文中的要点、核心问题．正文部分（Body paragraphs）--围绕主题开展叙述、讨论．结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）--对全文的总结和概括或发出号召．要做到全文中心突出、各层次之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯．前后呼应，要祛除与主题无关的内容．注意不要出现单词拼写错误及语法错误，切忌出现汉语式的英语，从而写出地道的言之有物的优秀英语作文．