Question

8．紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假．请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划．

暑  假  计  划

1、好好休息，学会放松

2、读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识

3、陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务

4、参加社会活动，了解社会

5、…

注意：
1、词数80～100；
2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名；
3、方框内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥．
参考词汇：知识 knowledge，社会活动 social activities．The summer holiday is coming．I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself．I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge．I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework．I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society．If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈你的假期计划．时态主要为一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1、好好休息，学会放松
2、读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识
3、陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务
4、参加社会活动，了解社会
5．其他
常用到的重点短语：
be going to 打算做某事
learn to do sth 学会做某事
make sb do sth 让某人做某事
try to do sth 尽力做某事
chat with sb 与某人聊天
take part in 参加

【高分句型】
1．I will read more useful books①because reading more books is ②not only interesting but also can③make me learn more knowledge．
①because 引导的原因状语从句．动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数．
②not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接两个对等的成分．
③make sb do sth 让某人做某事

2．I①am going to②take part in the social activities③so that I can know more about the society．
①be going to 打算做某事
②take part in 参加
③so that引导的目的状语从句．
3．If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．
if possible是省略句，完整表达是if it is possible．

解答 The summer holiday is coming．I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself．（好好休息，学会放松）I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge．（读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识）【高分句型】I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework．（陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务）I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society．（参加社会活动，了解社会）【高分句型】If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．（去上海看世博）【高分句型】I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday．

点评 本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，主要介绍我的假期计划，内容包括假期的放松方式，学习内容，帮助母亲和参加社会活动等，在写作时应注意主要使用将来时，同时应注意主要使用第一人称，同时应注意符合题意和语言的准确性．