Question

10．你即将离开学习和生活了三年的母校，新的生活即将开始，现在以Betty的身份为你最好的朋友Kendy写一段毕业留言，包括下列要点，可以适当发挥，字数80词左右．
Happy time：play basketball，go to the park …．

1  他给你留下深刻的印象．
2．你们在一起的度过的快乐时光及她对你的帮助．
3．对他美好的祝愿．
Impression：tall，outgoing，active…．
4．…
Best wishes：healthy，successful
…
My leaver's party speech
Dear Kendy，
Our life in the middle school will come to an end soon．I'll never forget you．You are a tall，active and outgoing boy．There's always a smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you．We used to play basketball on the playground．Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there．You often helped me with my English．At this very moment I'm saying goodbye to you，I just want to give you my best wishes：
　　I hope you are happy and healthy forever．
　　I hope you are successful in the future．
Yours
Betty．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是以Betty的身份给同班同学Kendy写一段毕业留言，内容包括他给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光以及对他（她）最美好的祝愿．
时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
描述图画；印象：个子高，开朗，活跃，一起打篮球去公园，祝愿健康和快乐
常用到的重点短语：
make friends 交朋友
used to do sth 过去常常做某事
have a good time 玩的开心
help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
【高分句型】
1，．①There's always a smile on your face and everybody likes to②make friends with you．
①there be表示有，表示存在．
②make friends with sb  与某人交朋友
2．①At this very moment I'm saying goodbye to you，I just ②want to give you my best wishes．
①At this very moment在此时此刻
②want to do sth 想要做某事
3．I hope you are happy and healthy forever．
hope后是省略了that的宾语从句

解答 Dear Kendy，
Our life in the middle school will come to an end soon．I'll never forget you．You are a tall，active and  outgoing boy．There's always a smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you．【高分句型】（印象）We used to play basketball on the playground．Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there．You often helped me with my English．（快乐时光）At this very moment I'm saying goodbye to you，I just want to give you my best wishes：【高分句型】
　　I hope you are happy and healthy forever．【高分句型】
　　I hope you are successful in the future．（祝愿）
Yours 
Betty

点评 这是一篇命题作文，写一段毕业留言．动笔前先确定书写内容，可以先简单描述这纪念相处的情况，然手再表达一下自己的感想，祝福等．由于是抒情性短文，故用将来时态较多，注意时态和时间状语的搭配．写作中选取自己比较熟悉的内同写，主要不要犯语法书写的低级错误．
这类作文的说些说难也容易，难在没有给出具体材料，需要自己组织材料，易在可以选取自己熟悉的内容写．不跑题不偏题是写好此类作文的关键，动笔前一定要认真阅读题目，要求然后在动笔．