Question

13．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"My Ideal School Life"．（以"我理想的学校生活"为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文）
Suggested question：
1．Is your school life enjoyable？
2．What changes would you like to see in your school？
3．What ideal school life do you want？

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in．我想参加我感兴趣的组织．这是一个定语从句．主句would like to do sth想要做某事．join in参加．先行词organizations组织，用which引导．从句be interested in对…感兴趣．
句型二：If you have a problem，you can ask the teacher and classmates for help．如果你有问题，你可以向老师和同学寻求帮助．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助．if从句用一般现在时，主句用may/might/can．

解答 My ideal school life
  Everyone has their own ideal school．I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful（理想中的学校生活）．I'm very happy to study in the school．（开心的学习）
  We have five classes every day．I like all the lessons，because the lessons are very interesting．And we can choose our favorite lessons to learn．（介绍课程） At noon，we have an hour's rest time．During the rest time，we can chat with classmates．（课间事情）　
I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful．We can play many ball games after school every day．There are many organizations and clubs in our school．I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in．（高分句型一） I would like to join many clubs，too．（参加各种俱乐部）　
  Doing homework is part of the school life，but the work is not much，and very easy．（作业情况）We often use emails to send our homework to the teacher．Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind．If you have a problem，you can ask the teacher and classmates for help．（高分句型二）
  In a word，my ideal school is like this．I hope my dream will come true one day．（愿望）

点评 写作时要明确要点，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，语法正确，结合要求，注意作文题材，不要写跑题．日常积累一些短语和词句．