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温馨提示：时事资讯是中考文科命题常选的话题，如何依据考纲探索书面表达命题时热门话题和教材的切入点，本题作了点尝试……

2014年2月13日,李坚柔顶替受伤的王濛参加索契冬奥会短道速滑女子500米比赛，决赛中,她抓住了三个对手一起摔倒的机会稳扎稳打成功摘金获得冠军。成为继大杨扬之后，史上第四位获女子500米世锦赛冠军的中国选手。王濛说：“也许是坚持带来幸运,这不能说为侥幸，虽有运气成分，但李坚柔付出了真正的努力，同时心态稳定，各种因素之下，才夺得冠军”。请以Chance and Success为话题写一篇英语作文。

要求：1. 可适当添加符合实际的内容，语句通顺，意思连贯;

2. 词数不少于80词;

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Answer 1

One possible version:

Chance and Success

To our great joy, Li Jianrou won the first prize in the Women's 500m Speed Skating on February 13th,2014. She is a lucky dog. As you know, chance is one of the most important parts of success. But chances don't come often. And not all the chances can certainly lead to success. What’s more, chances and hard work are usually twins; most people don't know them. So if you want to achieve something, you must make efforts and get prepared. Or you will take no advantage of chances when they come to you. In my opinion, there are plenty of chances for everyone in our society, but only those who have made enough preparations and are highly talented can make use of them to achieve their purpose. Li Jianrou did so. Don’t you think so?

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般过去时态，所以在写作时，要尤其注意一般过去时的表达方式。根据提示，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语, to one’s great joy, win the first prize, the Women's 500m Speed Skating, make efforts and get prepared, but only those who have made enough preparations and are highly talented can make use of them to achieve their purpose.写作时就可以适当运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。