Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你名叫张华，是“2018无锡马拉松”组委会的一名工作人员。近日，外联络部转发给你一位牙买加选手的电子邮件，并附上了组委会的处理意见。请根据邮件内容及处理意见给他回复。

Dear sir/madam,

I'm Alfred from Jamaica. I took part in 2018 Wuxi Marathon on March 25 and I got a silver medal. I didn't realize you had got my name wrong until I showed the medal to my friends. My family name is Morrison, with double 'r'. However, there's only one 'r' on the medal. How could this happen?! :-(

Yours sincerely,

Alfred MoRRison

处理意见：

1.重制奖牌，6月25日前寄出；

2.提供一张免费机票作为补偿(compensation),两年内可从世界任意地点飞往上海；

3. 旧奖牌须收回。

注意事项：

1.邮件内容须根据处理意见自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；

2.词数在80个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

3. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Morrison:

It is true that we have got your name wrong. I am sorry for making such a mistake.

We have decided to have made a new model for you after discussing it. It will be sent to you before June 25th. Meanwhile, we will offer you a free air ticket as compensation. You can fly to Shanghai from anywhere over the world within two years. But the old model must be taken back. If you have anything else, please contact with us anytime.

Thank you for supporting our work and wish you a good trip!

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Hua

【解析】这是一篇材料作文，以“2018无锡马拉松”组委会工作人员张华的名义给牙买加选手回复一封电子邮件，注意书信的格式。首先要认真阅读所提供的电子邮件，掌握其书信内容：来自牙买加的艾尔弗雷德在2018年无锡马拉松比赛获得了银牌，但奖牌上的名字“Morrison”漏写一个“r”，质疑组委会怎么会出现这种情况。在写作中要结合组委会的处理意见予以回复。首先要对所犯的错误表示道歉，然后结合三点处理意见逐一回复，最后要感谢对方对工作的支持并祝旅行愉快。在写作中，要注意有两处用到被动语态来表达：奖牌于6月25日前寄出（一般将来时的被动语态），旧奖牌须收回（含有情态动词的被动语态）。