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5．根据要求完成大作文，词数：60-80左右，不超过100字．
中央电视台《新闻1+1》1月15日报道，我国中东部的大部分地区被雾霾笼罩．这意味着这些城市的空气质量，已经达到了严重污染．雾霾天气导致道路管制、企业停工、机场关闭、港口停运，并使得市民的工作生活受到了很大影响．不仅如此，在多地的医院，患上呼吸道疾病的病人在大幅增加．报告列举一个关键的事实是，中国最大的500个城市中，只有不到1%的城市，达到了世界卫生组织推荐的空气质量标准，但世界上污染最严重的10个城市却有7个在中国．
请从环保的角度，写一写你对于空气污染的看法，并提出你的解决建议．These days，air pollution problem is becoming more and more serious．It has caused lots of trouble in our daily life．Polluted air can make us sick．So we must do something to stop it．If we want to go somewhere nearby，it's better to walk there or ride a bike instead of driving a car（高分句型）．We should plant more trees to get more fresh air（高分句型）．And the factories that let out waste air should be closed．
In a word，there is only one earth，we should do what we can to protect it．．

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分析 这是一篇提纲作文．时态以一般现在时为主；人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从两个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：①对空气污染的看法②你的解决建议
重点短语：
 1．more and more serious越来越严重
2．do something 采取措施
3．do what we can 尽我们最大努力
高分句型：
1．If we want to go somewhere nearby，it's better to walk there or ride a bike instead of driving a car．如果我们去附近的地方，最好是步行或骑自行车而不是开车．（固定句型：It's+形容词+to do ）
2．We should plant more trees to get more fresh air．为了获得新鲜的空气，我们应该多栽树．（动词不定式表目的）

解答 These days，air pollution problem is becoming more and more serious．It has caused lots of trouble in our daily life．Polluted air can make us sick（对空气污染的看法）．So we must do something to stop it．If we want to go somewhere nearby，it's better to walk there or ride a bike instead of driving a car（高分句型）．We should plant more trees to get more fresh air（高分句型）．And the factories that let out waste air should be closed．（你的解决建议）
   In a word，there is only one earth，we should do what we can to protect it．

点评 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．