Question

【题目】书面表达：(本题有1小题,共15分)

假设你是Li Ming,今年寒假要去参加平阳县组织的赴澳大利亚保护野生动物冬令营（Wildlife Protect Camp）活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇在开营式上的自我介绍。介绍必须包含要点提示，可适当拓展。要求词数在70-80之间，开头已给，不计入总词数。

要点提示：

1. 英文名字（Tony），来自浙江平阳， 出生于2001年。(was born in 出生于) 是一名八年级的学生；

2. 在班级里英语和科学成绩最好，擅长唱歌；

3. 学校离家两公里；骑自行车上学；

4. 谈谈该如何保护野生动物。

I’m very glad to introduce(介绍)myself to all of you .

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Answer 1

【答案】

I’m very glad to introduce myself to all of you. My English name is Tony. I was born in 2001. I live in Zhejiang ,PingYang ,I’m a student of Grate 8. I’m very healthy, because I often exercise. I go to school by bike with my friend Tom. It’s only two kilometers from our home to school. I does best in English and science I am good at singing . I’m going to be a teacher when I grow up. For this reason, I’m going to work hard and get good grades. I feel lucky to join you.I like animals . I hope I can protect them. That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中已经给出了很多信息和要点。在写作时，要注意审题，不要遗漏要点。从题目可知，这篇文章是自我介绍，所以要用第一人称写，可以用一般现在时。在组织语言的时候，要注意表达的准确性。句子要完整，表达要清晰，句子之间要流畅。

写作亮点：这篇文章紧扣材料，内容完整，表达清晰，整体通顺流畅。里面不乏好的短语和句子。文中用到了一些好的句式I does best in English and science I am good at singing . I’m going to be a teacher when I grow up也让文章增色不少。