Question

8．提示：初中生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生活．回顾其中的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记．请你用英语给你的某一位老师写一封信，和他（她）说说心里话．
要点提示：
①你的老师工作努力认真、教学耐心、待人友好等；
②记叙一件老师给予你学习和生活上帮助的事；
③表达你对老师的情感．
要求：
①语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个，已给出的词不计入总词数；
②文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
③将短文写在答题卡上．写在本试题卷上无效．
Dear my teacher，
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．
Since you became my English teacher three years ago，you've always been working hard．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly．All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years．I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．
Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!
Yours，
Lucy．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是给你的某一位教师写封信，和他（她）说说感激的心里话．注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称和第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
①你的老师工作努力认真、教学耐心、待人友好等；
②记叙一件老师给予你学习和生活上帮助的事；
③表达你对老师的情感．
常用到的重点短语：
work hard努力学习
be strict with sb in sth对某人在某事上严格
take care of照顾
get on with sb 与某人相处
encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
because of …因为…
make progress取得进步
【高分句型】
1．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．
and连接的两个感叹句how+形容词或副词+主语+谓语！作为forget的宾语从句．
2．①Because of your help，many students，including me，are ②more and more ③interested in English and④make much progress，too．
①because of因为…，后加名词代词或动名词．
②比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
③be interested in 对…感兴趣
④make progress取得进步

解答 Dear my teacher，
     Leaving you-lovely junior schoollife，I have so many words from my heart to say．
     Since you became my English teacher three years ago，you've always been working hard．（工作努力，认真）I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are【高分句型】（教学耐心，待人友好）．You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly．All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years．I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（给予学习上和生活上的帮助）
     Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．【高分句型】You have given me so much．
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（对老师的情感）
Yours，
Lucy

点评 本题是一篇提纲作文，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．本题要注意信件的格式．