Question

15．请你根据提示，针对环境污染日益严重的现状写一篇不少于80词的短文，呼吁大家保护环境，可适当发挥．
现状：1．大量的树木被砍伐，森林愈来愈少．
2．工厂排放污水，河流污染愈来愈严重．
3．浪费现象严重．
做法：1．多种树，减少一次性筷子的使用．
2．呼吁停止向河流排放污水．
3．如果能修理，就不要扔掉还能用的东西．
As we all know，our environment becomes worse and worse．Lots of trees are cut down，so we have fewer and fewer forests．Many factories pour dirty water into the rivers，which makes the pollution more and more serious．And people throw away many things that can be used for a long time．All of these do harm to our environment．So we must do something to protect our environment．First，we should plant more trees and had better not use disposable chopsticks．Second，we should stop the factories from polluting the rivers．What's more，we'd better reuse the things instead of throwing them away if they can be fixed．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是针对环境污染日益严重的现状谈谈保护环境的一些做法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
一现状：1．大量的树木被砍伐，森林愈来愈少．
2．工厂排放污水，河流污染愈来愈严重．
3．浪费现象严重．
二做法：1．多种树，减少一次性筷子的使用．
2．呼吁停止向河流排放污水．
3．如果能修理，就不要扔掉还能用的东西．
常用到的重点短语：
cut down 砍倒
pour…into…把…倒入…
throw away 扔掉
do harm to 对…不利
had better do sth 最好做某事
stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做某事
instead of 而不是
【高分句型】
1．Many factories ①pour dirty water into the rivers，②which③makes the pollution④more and more serious．
①pour…into…把…倒入…
②which作为关系词的非限制性定语从句．
③make sth adj 让某物怎么样
④比较级+and+比较级  越来越…
2．①What's more，②we'd better reuse the things ③instead of ④throwing them away⑤if they can be fixed．
①what's more再者
②had better do sth 最好做某事
③instead of 而不是，后跟动名词
④throw away 扔掉
⑤if引导的条件状语从句，其中can be fixed是情态动词的被动语态：情态动词+be+过去分词．

解答 As we all know，our environment becomes worse and worse．Lots of trees are cut down，so we have fewer and fewer forests．（大量的树木被砍伐，森林愈来愈少．）Many factories pour dirty water into the rivers，which makes the pollution more and more serious．【高分句型】（工厂排放污水，河流污染愈来愈严重）And people throw away many things that can be used for a long time．（浪费现象严重）All of these do harm to our environment．So we must do something to protect our environment．First，we should plant more trees and had better not use disposable chopsticks．（多种树，减少一次性筷子的使用）Second，we should stop the factories from polluting the rivers．（呼吁停止向河流排放污水）What's more，we'd better reuse the things instead of throwing them away if they can be fixed．【高分句型】（如果能修理，就不要扔掉还能用的东西）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．