Question

【题目】书面表达 （本大题共5分）

假如你是Sandy,想邀请好友Amy来你家。根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一篇邀请信。(包含所有要点，注意格式，字数80左右。)

要点：

1、新家位于市中心，周围有银行、超市、医院。

2、邻居们友好善良，经常帮助人们解决各种问题,大家就像一家人一样。

3、家中有很多事可做。……(发挥1-2句)

4、如果你能来，我会非常高兴。沿着幸福路走（Happy Road），在第二个十字路口向右拐。

5、很期待见到你。

Dear Amy,

I would like to invite you to my new home.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Amy,

I would like to invite you to my new home. My new home is in the centre of the city. There are banks, supermarkets and a hospital around my home. My neighbors are friendly and kind. They often help people with all kinds of problems. People here are like a big family.

There are many things to do in my home. We can have a big dinner. We can also enjoy the films and play games.

If you can come, I will be very happy. Walk along Happy Road and take the second crossing on the right.

I am looking forward to seeing you.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文是Sandy向Amy介绍她家的周围环境和邻居。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I would like to…；There are…，My neighbors are…，We can…以及I am looking forward to…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整的表达出提纲中所列的内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍写信的目的，邀请Amy到她家来玩，接下来介绍她家的周围环境、邻居、去他家的路线，最后期盼见到Amy。此处would like to do sth, invite sb to do sth, all kinds of, take the second crossing, on the right, look forward to doing sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。