Question

同学们，时间过得真快，去年的寒假生活( winter holiday) 仿佛还在眼前，转眼间，今年的寒假即将到来，你打算怎样度过呢？你是否已经下定决心了，是否已经计划好了？
请你以My coming winter holiday 为题目写80字 左右的短文。
                                                                    
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   
                                                                   

Answer 1

My winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming.I'm very excited.Because this is the matter that I have already expected for a long time.I have made a plan list concerning winter vacation first, so my winter vacation life then can become orderly.I will go some tour spots of China, such as Yellow Mountain,Tai Mountain etc..After that, I will spend some time studying some new knowledge and reviewing the contents of last term. Finally, I’ll stay at home for several days to take a rest. I think this winter vacation will be very meaningful.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我自己的寒假计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I have already expected......；I will go ......及I think.......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了寒假即将来临，我感到兴奋，接下来介绍我的 寒假计划，最后自己认为这个寒假将使非常有意义的。此处用了 made a plan list， spend some time studying， stay at home，take a rest等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。