Question

近期，我国一名中学生随父母旅游时，在埃及一著名景点文物上刻写“××到此一游”，此事经媒体曝光后，在国内引起极大反响。作为一名中学生，你就“如何文明旅游”这一话题，谈谈自己的看法。

提示：1、旅游中不文明的陋习，如……；

2、文明意识和行为，如……；

3、词数80左右（首句已给出，不计算在总词数之内）。

Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life._________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life. But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest. Some make noises in public places. Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on. As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behaviors. For example, throw rubbish into dustbins and don’t write or draw on the relics. Don’t make noises in public places. We’d better follow guides and obey orders. At the same time, we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions.

【解析】本题是就一起热点网络时间发表看法。故动笔前先要围绕自己想要表达的观点确定材料，表达自己对这起事件的看法，同时注意自己是中国人，要自觉的维护自己国家的形象。结合材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在及时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。