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3．近期，我国一名中学生随父母旅游时，在埃及一著名景点文物上刻写"××到此一游"，此事经媒体曝光后，在国内引起极大反响．作为一名中学生，你就"如何文明旅游"这一话题，谈谈自己的看法．
提示：1、旅游中不文明的陋习，如…；
2、文明意识和行为，如…；
3、词数80左右（首句已给出，不计算在总词数之内）．
Nowadays，traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life．But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest．Some make noises in public places．Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on．As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behaviors．For example，throw rubbish into dustbins and don't write or draw on the relics．Don't make noises in public places．We'd better follow guides and obey orders．At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions．．

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分析 本题是提纲作文，对一起热点网络事件中的不文明行为就"如何文明旅游"这一话题发表看法．故写作要点：1列举不文明行为．2．我的看法和文明行为，同时注意自己是中国人，要自觉的维护自己国家的形象．结合材料可知这篇短文使用的人称主要是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．
重点短语和句型：make noises 制造噪音
throw rubbish 扔垃圾
pay attention to 注意
had better do sth最后做某事
at the same time 同时
not only…but also不仅…而且…
At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions．同时，我们不仅应该保护自然环境而且要尊重当地的传统习俗．

解答 答案：Nowadays，traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life．But some travelers have some bad behaviors and habits while visiting some places of interest．Some make noises in public places．Others throw rubbish and write or draw everywhere and so on．（不文明行为）As a middle school student，I think we should pay attention to our behaviors．For example，throw rubbish into dustbins and don't write or draw on the relics．Don't make noises in public places．We'd better follow guides and obey orders（高分句型）．At the same time，we should not only protect natural environment but also respect local customs and traditions（我的看法以及一些文明行为）（高分句型）．

点评 此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数．另外可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有的放矢．