Question

19．假设你是江华，下周一你所在班级将举行英语课外阅读交流会．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍 The Famous Rabbit-Tortoise Race 这一故事．

Rabbit	win the second race be good at running
Tortoise	win the third race swim across the river
	take turns to put …on the back reach…together
What I have learned：…

要求：
1）文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3）词数：90词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）．
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise． 
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Answer 1

分析 本题要求介绍我们所熟悉的龟兔赛跑的故事，这是一个我们都很熟悉的故事，写作中注意将故事的内容介绍清楚，并介绍我们从中得到的教训．写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．结合所给材料，可知本文主要记述的是过去发生的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态．人称为第三人称．句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构．文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误，可用短语句型有after that，however，be good at，give up 等

解答 We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise．After that the rabbit decided to have a second race．This time he didn't sleep and won because he was good at running．
However，the tortoise didn't give up．He had a third race with the rabbit．There was a river on the way．The tortoise swam across it quickly and won．The story does not end here．In the last race they took turns to put each on the back and reached the finishing point together．From the story I have learned that with teamwork all of us can achieve success．

点评 本提纲式作文为考生提供了题目与一个简单的图画，将考生的写作控制在一定范畴．考生需紧扣寓言故事，并根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落．要避免不假思索地围绕提纲堆砌材料，写一些"不痛不痒"的句子，或者将中文提纲简单地译成英文，或者将英文提示生硬地搬到作文里．而是在所给材料的基础上，合理巧妙地构思全文，充分表现主题的过程．