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7．卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题．我校要举行以"关爱健康"为题的主题班会，请根据下面提示内容谈谈你的看法，写一篇80字左右的发言稿（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
主要内容有：保持健康的重要性，保持健康的方法或结论，你对健康的看法（如：多吃水果蔬菜，保持饮食平衡，多锻炼以健身强体，减少不良习惯 ）
Dear boys and girls．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise，eat more junk food，and they usually do not have enough time to sleep今天，许多青少年不健康，因为他们少运动，多吃垃圾食品，他们通常没有足够的时间睡觉．这是由because引导的原因状语从句．
高分句型二：If we wish to keep fit，we should follow the following advice如果我们想保持健康，我们应该遵循以下建议．这是由if引导的条件状语从句．

解答 Dear boys and girls，
I'm talking about how to keep fit．Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise，eat more junk food，and they usually do not have enough time to sleep．（高分句型一）（目前的现状）If we wish to keep fit，we should follow the following advice：（高分句型二）
Firstly，we must keep taking exercise every day，and eat lots of fruit and vegetables． Secondly，we should try to sleep for about 8 hours a night，and remember to"early to bed early to rise"． Finally，we should stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs． Besides（除此之外），we don't forget to breathe （呼吸）the fresh air in the open air．And remember to keep happy every day．（保持健康的方法）
That is my advice．I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life．（祝福）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．