Question

【题目】书面表达

上周你校成功举办(hold)了第十届艺术节（the tenth Art Festival）.晚会上同学们纷纷展示了自己的才艺。你的好友Bill获得了一等奖。请根据表格提示，介绍一下晚会的情况。80词左右。(hold的过去式held)

who	what
Bill	play a beautiful violin piece
Sonia	tell a funny story
Li Xin	dance without music
Ben	sing an English song

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last week our school hosted the Tenth Festival successfully. On the evening party ,the students showed their talent.Bill played a beautiful violin piece.We all liked it.Sonia told a funny story.It was very interesting.And it made us laugh.Li Xin danced without music.Ben sang an English song.It was beautiful.At last,Ben won the first prize.We were very proud of him.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍了晚会上的情况，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Li Xin danced without music.Ben sang an English song.It was beautiful.At last,Ben won the first prize.We were very proud of him.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。