Question

17．英语课上，老师组织大家就以下两幅图进行"To change or not"的话题讨论．请用英语
阐述你对此话题的看法．

注意：
（1）短文可结合图片信息或自身经历，作适当发挥：
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名：
（3）词数：80-100，短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数．
短文首句；Last week，we had a discussion about the topic"To change or not"．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 I think different people have different choices to deal with problems． 我认为不同的人有处理问题的不同的选择．这是一个宾语从句，I hope是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 
高分句型二
When I was in Grade 7，I had difficulty with my spoken English．当我在7年级时，我学英语口语有困难．
这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 Last week，we had a discussion about the topic"To change or not"【开头点明主题】．I think different people have different choices to deal with problems【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】．For example，when meeting with the weight problem，some people decide to take exercises to lose weight while others think they can't do anything about it．
When I was in Grade 7，I had difficulty with my spoken English．【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】Instead of giving up，I chose to change．I tried my best to listen to tapes and practice speaking every day．Now my pronunciation has been improved a lot．【正文部分详细介绍讨论内容】
In a word，we should take action to change．Surely it will make a great difference．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．