Question

【题目】书面表达

养成良好的习惯对我们的学习生活一直会有很大的帮助。请根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，发表在学校网站上。

良好的学习习惯	良好的生活习惯	益 处
课前预习 认真听讲 独立作业	健康饮食 经常锻炼 利用好时间	帮助我们更好地学习知识，提高技能 使我们学会自我控制
你的感受	(请结合自身认识，给出一至两点)

注意：1．表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数80左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3．表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

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Answer 1

【答案】

A Good Habit, a Successful School Life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson. In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully. Besides, it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.

In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet. Also, it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot. And we should learn to make good use of our time.

In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills. We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.

I think good habits are really good for our mind and body.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: A habit is something that …；强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等；make good use of充分利用…；连词besides，also，and等的使用让本文看起来更加条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩。