Question

假如你是Lily，你的同班同学Lin Mei 想认识你的好朋友Jack。请根据下面表格中的信息，用英语写一封e-mail向Jack介绍Lin Mei。邮件的格式和开头已给出，70词左右，可适当发挥。

Name	Lin Mei
Age	14
Birthday	June 20th
Favorite food	Ice-cream
Favorite color	Blue
Favorite sport	Basketball
Favorite subjects	P.E., English
Telephone number	265-4328
E-mail	linmei@sina.com

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
My classmate Lin Mei wants to know you. She is 14 years old. And her birthday is June 20^th. Ice--cream is her favorite food. And her favorite color is blue. She likes basketball most. Of all the subjects, she likes P. E. and English best. Her telephone number is 265-4328. Her E-mail is linmei@sina.com.
I hope you can become friends with her. We can play together then.
Best Wishes,
Lily

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照作文要求结合表格中的内容完成这篇介绍好友的文章，我们要用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含好友林梅的年龄、生日、最喜欢的食物、颜色、运动和课程等几个方面进行陈述。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了好友林梅的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，句式运用较为灵活，没有使用一贯的同一个句型，显得句式变化多变.如Ice--cream is her favorite food.，And her favorite color is blue.，She likes basketball most. Of all the subjects, she likes P. E. and English best.学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。