Question

15．假如你的网友David将来到你的学校，你要把他介绍给你的同学．请根据中文提示用英语写一篇70字左右的短文．（首句已经给出）
要求：要点完整，语句通顺，字迹清楚．
提示：113岁，南京人，现在和父母在北京生活；
2头发短，戴眼镜，身体强壮；
3待人友好，经常帮助他的同学们；
4学习认真，各门功课都很好；
5喜欢看排球比赛，想成为排球队员，希望他梦想成真．

I have an online friend．I have an online friend．His name is David．He is from Nanjing．He lives in Beijing with his parents．He is thirteen years old．

He has short hair and wears a pair of glasses．He is strong．

He is friendly to others．He often helps his classmates．（

He studies hard，and he is good at all subjects．He likes watching volleyball games．He wants to be a volleyball player one day．I hope his dream will come true．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇材料作文，介绍网友David．结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He is from…；He likes…及but he doesn't like…等句式的应用．写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用．写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系．

解答 答案：（要点一：介绍David个人信息）I have an online friend．His name is David．He is from Nanjing．He lives in Beijing with his parents．He is thirteen years old．（要点二：介绍外貌）He has short hair and wears a pair of glasses．He is strong．（要点三：介绍品格）He is friendly to others．He often helps his classmates．（要点四：介绍学习情况） He studies hard，and he is good at all subjects．（要点五：介绍爱好和梦想）He likes watching volleyball games．He wants to be a volleyball player one day．I hope his dream will come true．

点评 本文结构紧凑，语言简练．开头介绍了我的网友的名字，接下来介绍他来自的地方和他的年龄，最后介绍他爱好和梦想等．此处用了 be from，be friendly to，come true，等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少