Question

【题目】假如你是吴浩，你的父母打算春节期间带你和妹妹去北京。你们准备坐飞机去，请你给旅行社写封电子邮件，咨询有关航班，酒店和旅游景点的情况。留下你的电话，以便旅行社和你联系。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Best wishes!

Wu Hao

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to ask for your help about my family trip. My family is planning a trip to Beijing during the Spring Festival. We decide to travel by air, so we would like to know about flights to Beijing. Also, can you order three rooms in a good hotel? We want to know some information about places of interest in Beijing. You can contact me. My phone number is 8618399. Thanks for your help.

Best wishes!

Wu Hao

【解析】

本文属于应用文体，向旅行社询问去北京的航班、酒店以及旅游景点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如ask for help, decide to do, by air, would like to do, order, places of interests以及thanks for等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。