Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据下表提示用英语介绍Tom过去和现在的情况，并就此事谈谈你的看法及对他的建议。

要求：1．书写规范整洁，80词左右；

2．短文必须包括表格中的信息，条理清晰，观点明确，意思连贯。

3. 短文开头已给出，请接下去写，不计入总词数。

过去	喜欢看书，功课好，花很多时间学习和锻炼.
现在	因沉溺于玩电脑游戏和看电视导致对学习没兴趣，上课睡觉，不能完成作业，成绩差。
你的看法	玩电脑游戏可以使人放松，但…… 看电视能增长知识，但……
你的建议	(至少发挥两点)

Tom has changed a lot in the last few years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Tom has changed a lot in the last few years.

He used to like reading books and do well in his lessons .He also spent much time studing and doing exercises at school. But now he is so crazy about computer games and watching TV that he has no interest in his schoolwork and doesn't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Also, he can't hand in your homework on time and he often sleeps in class. Perhaps playing computer games can make him feel relaxed, but if he spends too much time on it,he will have less time to study. And it may be bad for his health. For example, it can hurt his eyes and hands.

I hope he should concentrate more on his schoolwork. Why not take part in some after-school activities when he feels bored? Why not spend more free time chatting with his friends?

【解析】给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如But now he is so crazy about computer games and watching TV that he has no interest in his schoolwork and doesn't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class.