Question

假如你叫张蒙，班主任王老师想了解班级同学的状况，以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求，给班主任王老师写封e-mail，说明自己的情况，并请她给你提一些建议。
内容要求：
1、学习任务重，睡眠不足，缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。
2、在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。
(参考词汇：have a lot of homework to do , not have enough time to sleep, do sports, talk/communicate, be not allowed to ,surf the Internet, listen to music)
注意：
1、字数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。
2、开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。
From: zhangmeng@163.com To:chlw524@sina.com   Subject: problems Date: March 23
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I’m very glad to write to you.                                        
                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                              
Best wishes,
Zhang Meng

Answer 1

From: zhangmeng@163.com To:chlw524@sina.com   Subject: problems Date: March 23
Dear Ms. Zhang,
I’m very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days. Every day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I don’t have enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk or play together.
    When I get back home from school, I’m not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favorite music. I feel worried about them. I don’t know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions?
Best wishes,
Zhang Meng

解析这篇书面表达是根据要点表述，要求要点全面，不能有遗漏，还要对要点进行处理加工，重要的内容要突出的描写，适当运用参考词汇，注意时态的使用，这篇作文应该是一般现在时，另外还要注意用一些好的句型：I have a lot of homework to do at school.这个句型在文章里使用的很好。I’m not allowed to watch TV,，这句话用了被动语态，I don’t know what I should do.这句话里what引导的宾语从句。这些都是好作文必备的。