Question

13．最近你校进行了一次"说出你的烦恼（Speak out your worries）的调查活动，请根据以下内容和提示要求写一篇英语短文，汇报调查结果并向老师和父母提出建议．
注意：1．词数80左右；2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息

学生比例	烦恼	你的建议
50%	作业多，睡眠不足，压力大	？
30%	父母不理解，缺乏交流
20%	活动少，体质差

Our school has made a survey---"Speak out your worries"．Here are the results．About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day that they don't have enough sleep．They feel stressed very much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents can't understand them and are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．
Dear teachers，would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves？Dear mom and dad，we will try/do our best to improve our studies and we want to take more exercise to stay healthy as well．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是汇报说出你的烦恼（Speak out your worries）的调查结果并向老师和父母提出建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1.50% 作业多，睡眠不足，压力大
2.30% 父母不理解，缺乏交流
3.20% 活动少，体质差
4．提出建议
常用到的重点短语：
be worried about  担心…
be weak in在某方面薄弱
be strict with sb"对某人严厉"；
get along well with"和某人合得来"；
try one's best to do sth"尽某人最大努力做某事
【高分句型】
1．They have ①so much homework②to do every day that they don't have enough sleep．
①so…that，如此…以至于…，that引导的结果状语从句．
②动词不定式做后置定语，修饰homework．
2．①It's difficult for them to ②get along/on well with their parents．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
②get along well with"和某人合得来"；
3．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．
that引导的宾语从句，作为complain的宾语．

解答 Our school has made a survey-"Speak out your worries"．Here are the results．
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day that they don't have enough sleep．【高分句型】They feel stressed very much．（50% 作业多，睡眠不足，压力大）About thirty percent of the students think their parents can't understand them and are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents．（30% 父母不理解，缺乏交流 ）【高分句型】The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．（20% 活动少，体质差）【高分句型】
Dear teachers，would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves？Dear mom and dad，we will try/do our best to improve our studies and we want to take more exercise to stay healthy as well．（提出建议）

点评 这是一篇图表作文．要求同学们根据图表内容写一份调查结果汇报，要将表格内容表述全面并根据调查结果写出你的建议．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．如：be strict with sb"对某人严厉"；get along well with"和某人合得来"；try one's best to do sth"尽某人最大努力做某事"等等．在平时学习中牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．