Question

书面表达 (共1题，计15分)
假设你是光华中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，内容包括：
1、目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
2、骑自行车的益处 (至少三点)。
注意：1、演讲稿应包含上述所有要点，并可适当发挥；
2、词数80左右，演讲稿开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：低碳生活 (low-carbon life)；节能 (energy saving)
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Guanghua Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.                                             
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

One possible version:
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua from Guanghua Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
It is known to us that cars bring us a lot of problems. Air pollution, the most serious one, has make it hard for humans to live. And with more and more people buying private cars, traffic becomes heavier and heavier. Therefore, it’s time for us to choose another transport, that is, cycling.
There are many good reasons to ride bicycles. Firstly, compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy. What’s more, bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars, because they hardly make noises. Cycling has become a new trend around the world, a good way of energy saving and low-carbon life. Last but not least, cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer. By riding bicycles, you can cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses.
So I think, riding bicycles actually has great effects on us. Let’s ride bicycles from today on!
That’s all. Thank you!

解析试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较简略，故动笔前要认真阅读材料，组织写作内容，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。写作中注意从两方面进行叙述，首先介绍当今的交通堵塞问题，然后分三点介绍骑行车的好处。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
考点：提纲类作文
点评:该题型主要考查学生的语言表达能力，在写作中根据所给提示和语言信息，不遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。做到表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯