Question

【题目】书面表达

为配合我市开展“创建文明学校(build a civilized school)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well at school”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。

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How to Behave Well

要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当发挥;

2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;

3. 词数：80词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw litter or spit about. It’s good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇英文征文比赛的参赛稿，首先一定要明确文章的主题现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文，所以要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的文章。

写作亮点：需要注意题目要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；3. 词数：80词左右。注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。