Question

【题目】幸福的人生应该是读书和运动的张弛有度。假如你是Tom,请根据下列信息给阳光编辑部的编辑写一篇90词左右的信，谈谈你对这句话的看法和愿望。

运动	强身健体 缓解压力 让你心情更加舒畅
读书	获取知识 增长才干 教会我谦虚做人
我的想法	……（至少两点）

要求：1. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Dear Editor,

Everyone wants to live a happy life. As students we should enjoy reading and take an active part in different kinds of sports.

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I hope my advice is worth taking.

Best wishes

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

Everyone wants to live a happy life. As students we should not only enjoy reading but also take an active part in different kinds of sports.

At school，P.E is such an important subject that it can make our body much stronger. Taking exercise can make us feel less stressed and feel good every day. We can also learn how to get on well with others by doing sports.

Reading is necessary because it can enrich knowledge and open our view. We can learn a lot about the world .It can make us be modest and make our life colourful.

I advise our school should encourage students to do more sports and reading. Students should have less homework and can have more chances to join Reading Club or P.E Club actively.

I hope my advice is worth taking. Best wishes

Tom

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下什么是幸福的人生。所提供的材料中列举了幸福的人生应该是读书和运动的张弛有度。主要从运动、读书和我的想法三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含卡片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

At school，P.E is such an important subject that it can make our body much stronger. 在学校，体育是一门非常重要的学科，它能使我们的身体变得更强壮。

句子that it can make our body much stronger. 是由that引导的定语从句。

【高分句型二】

Reading is necessary because it can enrich knowledge and open our view. 阅读是必要的，因为它能丰富知识，开阔我们的视野。

句子because it can enrich knowledge and open our view. 是由because引导的原因状语从句。