Question

【题目】书面表达

以“My Mother”为题，写一篇80字左右短文介绍你妈妈。

1. 外貌：高且苗条，有一头乌黑的长发，喜欢穿裙子和靴子，看起来又年轻又漂亮。

2. 职业：在家附近的一家大商场里做售货员，对顾客（customers ）很友好。

3. 生活方式很健康，每天走路去上班，吃很多蔬菜和水果。

4. 你很爱你的妈妈，因为……（自拟一至两点）

My Mother

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Mother

My mother is tall and slim. She has long black hair. She likes to wear dresses/skirts and boots. It makes her look young and pretty.

She is a shopkeeper in a shopping mall near our home. She is kind to customers.

She has a healthy lifestyle. She walks to work every day and eats a lot of vegetables and fruit.

I love my mother very much, because she loves me very much.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己妈妈的情况，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如She has a healthy lifestyle. She walks to work every day and eats a lot of vegetables and fruit.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。