Question

17．毕业前的班会上，老师想让大家畅所欲言，谈谈三年来的收获以及感想．下面表格是老师要求你谈到的三个方面，请根据表格内容，写一篇短文，来谈谈吧！

About study	learn…； improve…
About friends	make friends…； get along with…
About future	…

要求：1．短文须包括所有提示和你补充的内容；
2．短文中涉及的三个要点都要适当发挥；
3．短文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；
4．词数：80个左右（已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数）．
Hello，everyone，
I have a lot of things to share with you．First，I want to talk about my study．During the past three years，I have learned many subjects，like English，maths and so on．I study hard，and many of my subjects have improved．
Second，I'd like to say something about making friends．I have made many friends，we often help and learn from each other，and we get along well with each other．
At last，I want to tell you about my future．I like helping people，so I think I can be a doctor when I grow up．That is my dream．
．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we get along well with each other我们彼此相处的很好．
get along well with sb：与某人相处
【高分句型二】
 I think ①I can be a doctor②when I grow up．我认为当我长大了我能成为一名的医生．
①think后是省略that的宾语从句．
②when引导的时间状语从句

解答 Hello，everyone，
I have a lot of things to share with you．First，I want to talk about my study．During the past three years，I have learned many subjects，like English，maths and so on．I study hard，and many of my subjects have improved．（学习）
Second，I'd like to say something about making friends．I have made many friends，we often help and learn from each other，and we get along well with each other【高分句型一】．（朋友）
At last，I want to tell you about my future．I like helping people，so I think I can be a doctor when I grow up．【高分句型二】That is my dream．（未来）
That's all．Thank you!

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．