Question

文段表达（10分）

根据题目要求和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。

假如你叫李华，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的好友，请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：tall, kind-hearted, help, encourage, important

 

 

To Jim From Li Hua Subject My best friend Hi!Jim, I’m glad to hear from you._____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours , Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Hi Jim,

I’m glad to hear from you. I’d like to introduce my best friend Zhang Nan to you.

Zhang Nan is a lovely girl. She is tall and thin with short hair. She often wears a pink dress.

Zhang Nan is kind-hearted and always ready to help others. When we were in Grade Seven, she was good at maths and she often helped me after class. She encouraged me to work out the problems. Day by day I made great progress with her help. Then we became good friends.

I think friendship is the most important thing in my life. It is like hidden treasure. It brings me

happiness and confidence.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文所给提纲要点清晰，要求明确，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，挖掘内涵，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些的固定句式和短语，如：would like to do sth、be ready to do sth、be good at 、encouraged sb to do sth、day by day、make progress等，这为文章增添不少亮点。学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。