Question

你是一名八年级的学生，星期天你和班里的同学乘校车去敬老院参加了社区志愿者活动。请用英语写一篇80词左右的日记。

审题思路

1. 由题干可知，此为一篇日记。

2. 主题事件：went to the old people’s home on Sunday

3. 活动描述：help them do a lot of things,such as sweeping the floor，cleaning the windows  

4. 心得收获：I think it’s our duty to help the old people.

写作提醒

1. 日记一般用一般过去时描述发生过的事情。

2. 写作时需用第一人称叙述。

3. 叙述事件时，注意先后顺序。

常用表达

1. We took the school bus to the old people’s home.

2. The old people greeted us happily and they were very pleased to see us.

3. We swept the floor for the old people.

4. Some girls danced for them and we enjoyed ourselves today.

5. We helped the old people (to) clean their house.

6. I think it’s our duty to help the old people.

连句成篇

根据题目要求及要点，运用作文模板，在横线上填上适当的内容。 

Sunday                          Fine 

Today,we to        the old  people’s home. The old people greeted us happily and they        see us.  We       volunteered  to help  them do a lot of things there. We           and cleaned the windows and the tables. Some girls        and we        today.  Finally, we       the  old people  and them. The dishes were delicious. I think       help the old people.

Answer 1

took the school bus;were very pleased to;swept the floor;danced for them;enjoyed ourselves;cooked meals for;had lunch together with;it’s our duty to