Question

学完了Food and Lifestyle这个单元后，老师要求同学们以此为标题，写篇相关的英语小段文，自我对照找差距。

注意事项：1．不得出现学校和本人真实姓名。

2．下列表格中的内容不得遗漏。

My Food and Lifestyle
Hobby	…	Try to use the following expressions
	Lunch	…	often/always/sometimes/never/seldom .help/give me be good/bad for…
Dinner	…
Sports	…
Sleep Sleep	… …
Plans/needs	…

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Answer 1

I am a middle school student. My hobby is collecting stamps. It brings me a lot of pleasure in my free time.

For breakfast I often have egg and milk. I always have lunch at school. Sometimes I eat beef and vegetables for lunch. Because I think they are good for my health. As for dinner, I eat at home. My mother never cooks fish. She hates the smell like that.

I take some exercise every day. I often play basketball with friends. It helps me keep healthy and strong. I try to sleep 8 hours a day. I plan to read more books later. I’m sure books can give me a rich and colorful life.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们就“Food and Lifestyle” 写一篇短文。在表格中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括五部分的内容。一是我的爱好；二是一日三餐的食物；三是体育运动。四是睡眠情况。五是我的计划以及需要完善的地方。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者按表格所要求的写作顺序，讲述了自己的一些情况，层次清晰表达到位。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I’m sure books can give me a rich and colorful life.这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如As for dinner, I eat at home. I’m sure books can give me a rich and colorful life.等。

考点：表格类作文。