Question

根据中文意思和英文所提示的词语,并结合自己的想象,写出意思连贯,符合逻辑饿一篇短文。所给的英文提示词语必须全部都用上；中文提示不必逐句翻译。

提示：上周三下午韩梅放学后乘车回家。在车上她发现司机在学英语。司机对韩梅说了些什么？此事对你有何启示？为2008年北京奥运会你打算做些什么？

英文提示：afternoon,  go home;  on the bus;  find;    learn;   surprised;  weak;  English;  when;  work hard;  Beijing’s Olympic Games;  I think;   modern

 

Answer 1

 Last Wednesday afternoon, Han Mei went home from school by bus. On the bus she found that the driver was learning English. She was very surprised and asked, “What’re you doing that for?” The driver said, “I was weak in English when I was at school. Now I’m working hard at it to get ready for Beijing’s Olympic Games in 2008.” I think holding the Olympic Games is not the task of the government. Everyone can take part in it and do something for it. As a student, I can try my best to learn English well so that I can help the foreigner people in need then. I also can do some volunteer work.

【解析】

试题分析：这是篇命题作文。可以根据提示内容对事情进行阐述然后发表自己的观点。写作时，要注意时态的正确的使用和主谓一致问题。文章的表述要准确流畅，可适当使用一些承接性的句子和短语。

【亮点分析】

这篇文章结构完整，表述清楚流利。文中使用了一些常用的表达方式和句型，例如：Now I’m working hard at it to get ready for Beijing’s Olympic Games in 2008.我现在努力学习英语来为2008年的北京奥运会准备。Work hard at 努力做……；动词不定式表目的。As a student, I can try my best to learn English well so that I can help the foreigner people in need then.作为学生，我会尽力学好英语，为了那时能帮助有困难的外国人。Try my best尽我最大努力；so that 为了。

考点：提纲作文。