Question

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李华，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的学校活动，他想了解你最喜欢的一项学校活动。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。

提示词语： like, go, do, best

To Jim

From Li Hua

Subject my favorite school activity

Hi, Jim! I’m glad to hear from you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

We have quite a few after-school activities, but I like out goings best. Last month our class went to the Great Wall. While we stepped on the Wall, we saw it stretch far into the distance and also saw kinds of flowers on the mountains. Of course, we took a lot of nice pictures and sang and shouted on the way. We enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful scenes. It helped us learn more out of school, such as history, photograph, and so on.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求学生回复人家的邮件，向别人介绍自己的学校活动以及自己的最喜欢的一项活动。在写作时应该注意短语的运用和句型变化。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文行文流畅，语言运用娴熟。恰当描述了自己最喜欢的活动，并且能熟练运用连词或过渡词：but, while, such as。同时，能够选择合适的例子，准确地运用时态和词组进行表达。

考点：图表作文。