Question

4．如今学生们依赖父母的庇护，每天的任务就是努力学习取得好成绩，将来进入一所好的大学，在家不愿做家务，不会关心父母，不体谅父母的辛苦，有篇文章写得好，没有伞的孩子才会努力奔跑．请你以We should help parents do housework为题目，写出学生们的在家里的普遍现象，你在家常做哪些家务，你对此事的体会和看法．
要求：
1．表达清晰，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2．必须包括上文中所提到的要求，并做适当的发挥．
3．词数：80词左右（文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）4．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework现在许多学生说他们太忙了他们的学习，他们没有时间帮助他们的父母做家务．too…to…太…而不能…加强语气．
句型二：Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents分担家务有助于我们与父母建立良好的关系．it is+形容词+for sb to do sth固定句型．

解答 Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they don't have time to help their parents with the housework【高分句型一】．I don't think they are true，that's all excuses．（表明自己的观点）
      In my opinion，doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility．It can also make us independent．We can't depend on others all our life．Sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents【高分句型二】．I think trying to do some housework can keep us healthy and strong，some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise．And we can take care of ourselves better when we grow up．
      On weekdays，I often help my parents clean my bed room every morning and wash dishes after supper．At weekends，washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty．And I also help my parents carry something heavy from the supermarket．
      As the saying goes'One can't make a big success without being self reliant'，so I think that students should often share the housework in our daily life．

点评 首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．