Question

1．要求：初中学习生活，即是学习文化知识的过程，也是学习与人相处，学习自我保护的过程．请用英语写一份发言稿，谈谈你的看法．

与人相处	1．诚实对人，信任朋友 2．乐意和朋友分享 3．随时准备帮助别人 4．（你的一点做法）…
自我保护	1．不在马路上玩耍 2．不把地址告诉陌生人 3．火灾中，尽快撤离． 4．进出教学楼，…（你的一点看法） 5．在家做饭…（你的一点看法）

要求：1．短文中必须包含以上所有要点，根据要求适当补充．
2．词数100左右．
3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名．
 4．参考词汇：躲 hide 教学楼，teaching buildings
We are middle school students．When we are at school，we should not only study knowledge，but also study how to get along with others and how to protect ourselves．I thinkwe should get along well with others．Be honest and trust your friends．We should be glad to share our feelings with our friends．It is necessary to be ready to help others．What's more，you should be friendly to the people around you．
It is very important to knowhowtoprotectourselves．Don't play on the road．Don't tell your address to the strangers．When you are in a fire，you should leave as soon as possible．When you enter and leave the building，you should be careful．Pay attention to the fire when you cook at home．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What's more，you should be friendly to the people around you．
句中使用短语有"what's more 再者，而且"、"be friendly to sb 对…友好"．这句话意为：再者，我们应该友好地对待我们身边的人．
高分句型二：
When you are in a fire，you should leave as soon as possible．
句中"When you are in a fire"为时间状语从句．句中短语有"as…as possible  尽可能地…"．这句话意为：当你在火灾中，尽快撤离．

解答 We are middle school students．When we are at school，we should not only study knowledge，but also study how to get along with others and how to protect ourselves．（开篇点题）
I think we should get along well with others．Be honest and trust your friends．We should be glad to share our feelings with our friends．It is necessary to be ready to help others．What's more，you should be friendly to the people around you．【高分句型一】（与人友好相处）
It is very important to know how to protect ourselves．Don't play on the road．Don't tell your address to the strangers．When you are in a fire，you should leave as soon as possible．【高分句型二】When you enter and leave the building，you should be careful．Pay attention to the fire when you cook at home．（保护自己）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．