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【题目】八、书面表达

请根据下列要点提示，写一封信告诉你美国朋友艾米中国中秋节的情况。 词数70词左右，注意书信的格式。

1．中秋节是一个非常重要的中国节日。它通常在九月份或十月份。

2．节日那天，中国人总是和家人一起庆祝。

3．他们聚在一起吃顿大餐。餐后，他们通常出去赏月，吃月饼等。

4．他们玩得开心……

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Answer 1

【答案】The Mid-autumn Festival is an important festival in China. It usually comes in September or October.

On that day, Most Chinese celebrate it with their family members. All the family get together and have a big dinner. On the night of the Mid-autumn Festival, people often sit outside to watch the beautiful moon. They chat happily. They eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon.

People often have a good time on that day. They tell the story of Chang’e, watch the Mid-Autumn Gala on TV. How happy they are!

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