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4．假如你是刘岚，Linda 是两年前就读你学校的交换生，昨天你收到了她的电子邮件．请根据下面的邮件及提示内容，给她回一封邮件．

Dear Liu Lan， Long time no see!How is everything going？I miss you very much．I think you must be more beautiful now．Write and tell me what you look like now． Yours， Linda

提示：1，比以前长高了，更健康了．
2，看电视、玩电脑的时间少了，学习的时间多了．
 3，性格变得外向了，交了很多朋友．
要求：1，语句通顺，语意连贯．
2，用上所有提示内容．
3，邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
4，70词左右．

Dear Linda， Long time no see!I also miss you very much．I am very glad to receive your letter and I am willing to tell your some changes on me．Now I am much higher than before and I am much healthier．I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games，but now I have changed a lot．I prefer to spend time on my study．At the same time，I have been more outgoing and easygoing．I make a lot of friends and I can get well on with all of them．I am so happy that I have changed so many! Come to visit me if you are free． Yours， Liu Lan

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games． 我过去花太多的时间看电视或玩电脑游戏．used to do sth．过去经常做某事；spend  doing sth．花费时间做某事．
  高分句型二
I am happy I have changed so many!我很高兴我改变了这么多！这是一个宾语从句，I am  happy是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 Dear Linda，
Long time no see!I also miss you very much．I am very glad to receive your letter and I am willing to tell you some changes on me．Now I am much higher than before and I am much healthier．【要点一，比以前长高了，更健康了】I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games【高分句型一，注意固定词组的使用】，but now I have changed a lot．I prefer to spend time on my study．【要点二，看电视、玩电脑的时间少了，学习的时间多了】At the same time，I have been more outgoing and easygoing．I make a lot of friends and I can get well on with all of them．I am  happy  I have changed so many!【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】【要点三，性格变得外向了，交了很多朋友】
Come to visit me if you are free．
Yours，
Liu Lan

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．