Question

假如你是Mike, 最近如东“关心下一代周报”正在评选“最美学生”（the most beautiful student）, 请你根据下面表格中的提示，写一封推荐信给编辑，推荐你的同学Bob。

Personal information 个人基本信息	1. 邱升中学初三2班学生 2. 出生在1999年11月25日 3. 喜欢绿色，认为绿色代表大自然，可以给人能量 4. 喜欢听音乐，音乐能使他放松.
Personality 个性	1. 自信，……(举例) 2. 乐于助人，帮助同学解决学习、生活上问题 3. 聪明，考试总得高分，好几次考班级第一名 4. 勤勉的，……(举例)

要求：1. 须包含以上所有要点，并适当发挥；

2. 词数90词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to recommend Bob as “the most beautiful student” of Rudong.____________

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I think that Bob can be “the most beautiful student”. I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Mike

Answer 1

He is the student in Class 2，Grade 9 of the Qiu Sheng Middle School．He was born in November 25, 1999. He likes green and he thinks that the green is the colour of nature and it stands for new lives and growth. Bob also likes listening to the music. Because it makes him feel relaxed.

He is very confident. For example, He always speaks more actively in class. He is a kind-hearted person. He often helps classmates who is difficulty in life or study. In fact, he was clever enough to get the first place. Besides, he studies hardest in my class. He loves reading books when he is free.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求介绍关于Bob的基本情况及性格爱好。通过分析材料中要点可知短文的时态主要为一般现在时，还需注意第三人称单数时谓语动词的形式。学生应该避开自己不会的东西，多套用学过的、熟悉的句型，还要做到避免重复句式。使文章结构合理，内容连贯，行文流畅。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是主谓结构。但是通过这些简单句式的灵活搭配，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对Bob有了一个比较全面的了解， 是值得我们学习的一篇佳作。