Question

7．假如你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为"健康成长"的英语演讲比赛．请按要
求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：1．保持快乐的心情；2．努力学习；3．积极参加体育锻 炼．
注意：1）词数  80 词左右；
2）可以适当发挥想象，增加细节，使行文连贯；
3）文章开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear friends，we all want to grow up happily and healthily，So we have to do some things．
First，we should keep ourselves happy．Life is not always full of sunshine．When we are in trouble，we should be brave enough to deal with problems．Next，we must study hard because knowledge is power．The more knowledge we have，the more confident we will be．Finally，
In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．We can go running，play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study．If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容为以健康成长为题写一篇演讲稿．时态为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从三方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1．保持快乐的心情；2．努力学习；3．积极参加体育锻炼．
常用到的重点句型和短语：
firstly，next，finally首先…接下来…最后…
it's adj to do…做某事是…
be full of 充满了
deal with处理
knowledge is power知识就是力量
in order to为了…
keep fit保持健康
参考句子：
When we are in trouble，we should be brave enough to deal with problems．
句中when引导的时间状语从句，以及adj+enough to do sth表示足够怎么样去做某事．
The more knowledge we have，the more confident we will be．
句中的the+比较级，the+比较级表示越来越…
Finally，In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．
句中的in order to do sth作为目的状语，so that引导的目的状语从句．
If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．
if句中表示如果，引导的条件状语从句，主将从现．

解答 Dear friends，we all want to grow up happily and healthily，So we have to do some things．
First，we should keep ourselves happy．Life is not always full of sunshine．When we are in trouble，we should be brave enough to deal with problems（高分句型）（保持快乐的心情）．Next，we must study hard because knowledge is power．The more knowledge we have，the more confident we will be．（努力学习）（高分句型）Finally，In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．（高分句型）We can go running，play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study．（积极参加体育锻炼．）If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．（高分句型）（总结，首尾呼应）

点评 本文属于提纲类作文，文字提示里所给要点不多，考生需要做适当的发挥，在写作的过程中，一定要注意使用合适的连接词来连接全文如firstly，next，finally等；让文章成为一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和高级句型提升问的文采和层次．
提纲类作文最重要的是要把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏或省略．本文所给要点不多，需要考生做较多的发挥，在写作时，注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采．