Question

9．为了更好地开展2014年全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题．请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议．
要点提示：
1．阅读的好处：
2．你的建议（如：建更多小型图书馆，经常性地介绍好书等）；
3…
要求：
1．词数：80词左右开头，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称．
Hello，my dear friends．As we all know，reading is very important to us．So we must make a good atmosphere for the readers．To achieve this goal，I think we must do the following things well．
Firstly，In the reading room，we must keep slience and do somg thinking．We should provide some help to the man that need help，and we should not to speak loudl．It is very impolite to everyone．We should keep the reading room clean，because it is a public to us．Everyone shoud keep quiet in the reading room．And you can't eat anything or throw the rubbish on the ground．
Music，singing and smoking are not permitted．
Secondly，there must be lots of books in the reading room，if we have some interesting books，we can donate them to the library．At the same time，our government should pay much money on the building of libraries．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，比如在表达建议时可用句型：We should/shouldn't…适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，如：firstly；secondly．

解答 范文：
  Hello，my dear friends．As we all know，reading is very important to us．So we must make a good atmosphere for the readers．To achieve this goal，I think we must do the following things well．Firstly，In the reading room，we must keep slience and do somg thinking．We should provide some help to the man that need help，and we should not to speak loudly．It is very impolite to everyone．We should keep the reading room clean，because it is a public to us．Everyone shoud keep quiet in the reading room．And you can't eat anything or throw the rubbish on the ground．Music，singing and smoking are not permitted．
Secondly，there must be lots of books in the reading room，if we have some interesting books，we can donate them to the library．At the same time，
our government should pay much money on the building of libraries．

点评 一篇好的书面表达要有合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清新．为了使文章结构紧凑，自然流畅，段落之间要使用适当的过度语；句子之间要使用合理的逻辑衔接词．