Question

【题目】书面表达

为深入开展“解放思想，改进作风，奋发有为，创先争优”主题教育实践活动，学校正在开展“创建文明班级”活动，请根据下表的内容，以“A Meaningful Activity”为题，向报社投稿，介绍活动有关的情况。

主题	告别陋习，握手文明
目的	根除乱扔、乱吐、乱画、吸烟、喝酒等现象； 提倡穿校服、讲礼貌。
内容	举办图片展，进行先进班级评比（环境和行为）等。

要求：1、必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；2、词数：70 - 90；

3、参考词汇：文明 civilization; 校园 campus; 告别陋习，握手文明 “Get rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”

A Meaningful Activity

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school has now started the activity of "build civilized classes". The topic is “Get Rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”.

We can still see some bad habits in our school. Some students throw rubbish everywhere or spit in public. Some even get into bad habits，such as smoking and drinking. We hope the students break away from these bad habits. We advise the students to wear their uniform and be polite to others. During the activity, we have held a picture show, a competition between classes for better environment and behavior, and so on.

We all hope that we’ll build each class into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍教育实践活动的内容。写作中注意写明活动的主题、目的及内容。注意不能遗漏提示中的要点。结合材料可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意主谓一致问题，及人称和固定词组的用法。

【亮点说明】1. 上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。运用所给提示词，语言通俗易懂，有号召力。

2.句式简单，言简意赅。固定词组in public./break away/ advise sb to do/ sth./ be polite to /and so on./宾语从句We hope the students break away from these bad habits./ We all hope that we’ll build each class into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place. 3.注意适当使用连词，smoking and drinking./ wear their uniform and be polite to others./ into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place.