Question

【题目】写作。（15分）

假设你是Jack，你有一个最好朋友名叫Jim，请根据以下内容向大家介绍你们的情况。

Name	Height(身高)	Personality(性格)	Hair	Get up	Go to school	like
	tall	Funny	long
Jack	★★	★★★	★★	6:40	By bike	Play soccer
Jim	★★	★★	★★★	6:30	On foot	Read books

要求：1. 以My best friend and I 为题写一篇60词左右的文章;

2. 主谓结构完整，语句通顺，语法基本正确；

3. 层次清楚；卷面整洁，书写规范。（2分）

My best friend and I

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend and I

I’m Jack and my best friend is Jim. I’m as tall as Jim. But Jim is funnier than I. My hair is longer than Jim’s. In the morning I get up at 6:40 while Jim gets up at 6:30. We all like school very much. I go to school by bike and Jim goes to school on foot. I like playing soccer and Jim likes reading books. We get along well with each other.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求介绍我自己（Jack）和Jim的情况。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作内容，主要包括身高、性格、头发、起床时间、上学方式以及喜好。主要内容虽然已经给出，但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求,介绍了杰克和吉姆。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如We get along well with each other.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I’m as tall as Jim. But Jim is funnier than I. I like playing soccer and Jim likes reading books.等。