Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是刘云, 现在的你和两年前相比, 有很大变化。对于将来, 你有很多憧憬, 请根据下表写一篇短文。

	Two years ago	Now	In thirteen years
身份	a primary school student	a Grade 8 student	a doctor
外貌	矮，短发	高了些，头发和以前一样短	高得多
个性	害羞，朋友少	更外向，朋友更多	自信confident，友好
爱好	弹钢琴	每周打两次乒乓球	\
理想	钢琴家	长大后当医生	\

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

I'm Liu Yun. Two years ago, I was a primary school student. I was short with short hair. I was shy and had few friends. At that time, I liked playing the piano and I wanted to be a pianist.

Now I'm a student in Grade 8. I'm taller, but my hair is as short as before. I'm more outgoing and I have more friends. I play ping-pong twice a week with my friends.

I want to be a doctor when I grow up. I will be much taller. I will be confident and friendly to everybody. I hope my dream will come true.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求对两年前和现在进行比较，并且描述对未来的憧憬。注意时态，不同时间选择时态不同。两年前和现在对比要应用形容词或副词的比较级。注意上下文衔接，使文章连贯，通顺。